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Ammara Ahmad
Pakistan, Lahore

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my beloved pups

my beloved pups

the day started on a bad note.....the puppy died....she layed there lifeless, with her eyes open and all i cud think of was the day juss 9 days ago, that she had walked into my life, tiny and hariy and naught, she was the smarter of the two, wud run after me and try new tactics to catch me, she ate little, and was slightly thinner
i called her dolly after the coloned sheep, my bro called her tinku and dad finalized that she is offically jackie.
this was written on her hospital card too..lol...
JAckie dogson....
she has ticks on her body, in urdu we call them chichar, and they r the lice of the cats and dogs....
she had a pink belly, hairless and soft, whenever i used to go out she used to lick my feet...anitially i made them sleep in my room, thats where the peed for the first time.....
they always responded to my presence with affection....no wonder dogs are man';s best friend...i feel dogs understand humans alot more then many humans themselves....
and today my mom called me...
and said the ***** is dead...
she had lost alot of weight....the hair were now full of mud...and there was poop all over the place......because of the diarhea...
just 9 days ago i hoped the pups will have pups of their own in the coming months and 10 or so years later.....jackie will die of old age... peacefully in the basket i had brought for her.....But thats the way it is.....pups are alive and whatever is alive can die...
it reminded me of how crazy life is....one fine morning...someone wil wake up to find us dead too...with our eyes open or closed.....but lifeless and staring in a space miles miles away ....away from life and all the hassles of life====
sorry.....i think this is by far the saddest post i ever wrote....and its my 500th post on MM.....and it goes to Jetty....
Wherever that great heart may now be
Here on Earth or harbored in paradice

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articulating Comment by: articulating - 2006-04-27 12:54
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thanx for the consolation......
Comment by: - 2006-04-22 02:51
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I know your pain. i took lost a beloved little dog but he was 22months old. if you want to read about him i have written a story a trubute to bobby. he was born with a hole in his heart.
Dogs are very special.
I have 7 puppies sitting at my feet now they are only 4 weeks old. so cute. I wish i could mial you one to make you feel better.
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