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mom
amy ganje
United States, ny, ballston spa

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Regret

Everyone has regrets here and there
the what could have been's
the missed conversation's
the lost loves of our lives
the more we think of what could have been
the less we control what could be
any way you look at things
the word regret is alway's there
with all new decisions to be made
our regrets will be there
though this is true we need to move on
for regrets may be with us
they should not hinder our focus
to be the best we can be

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Comment by: - 2006-05-06 13:36
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hi mom
wow, so painfully true.
quickrymer Comment by: quickrymer - 2006-04-30 00:27
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Absolutely true. You say what others can only think and that is what makes a wordsmith.lol
Mystie Comment by: Mystie - 2006-04-27 02:24
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I love the point of this. though one may have regrets, one must move on lest we forget not to make more, sort of anyways. Keep writing. nice one.
dreamer Comment by: dreamer - 2006-04-23 17:34
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I think this is an improvement. You are are on your way to becoming a great poet.
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-22 11:55
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oh yeah. well-captured. i love the second line. another good one.
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