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Comment by: - 2006-05-06 13:36
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hi mom
wow, so painfully true. |
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| Absolutely true. You say what others can only think and that is what makes a wordsmith.lol |
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Comment by: Mystie - 2006-04-27 02:24
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| I love the point of this. though one may have regrets, one must move on lest we forget not to make more, sort of anyways. Keep writing. nice one. |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2006-04-23 17:34
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| I think this is an improvement. You are are on your way to becoming a great poet. |
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| oh yeah. well-captured. i love the second line. another good one. |
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