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Haymish Lam
United Kingdom, Dorset

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Words That Carry On Into the Night.

To silence myself to those words I dare not say,
For fear of playing the fool in a kingly court.
The words that fabricate- which refuse to stray.
Company of the starry night is what I've sought.
Such peaceful echoes throughout the darkened skies.
Windy chill merges expired air by its wrought.
Emotion that rolls gingerly, through windy rise.
Carried far and wide through the freedom of air.
Hear the whispers flutter like vibrant butterflies.
Flying ever onwards to my love I have declared.
Walking now to her abode through paths of times before.
Thoughts of meeting her embrace- i'm silenced no more.



Copyright © 2006. The moral right of Haymond Lam as the author of this work has been asserted in accordance of the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act of 1988.



Just like to say infinite hugs and kisses to the wifey for putting up with me for my bouts of nutiness and for giving me a warm embrace no matter what.

Angela I love you loads.

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-11-26 05:50
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Love the classic touch. Makes it applicable to all times. Lovely read. Thands for sharing.
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-09-15 08:42
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This is excellent, Mish. Beautiful and the epitomy of a love poem. The imagery and romance in it are painted with a brush of true love. Well done. Yvylyn
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-04-23 20:16
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This was a truly wonderful tribute. Thanks for sharing your love affair. I think this is one of your best. I felt the tenderness

Emotion that rolls gingerly, through windy rise.

Lovely piece for Angela.
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2006-04-21 17:13
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Stunning stuff Haymish. You are clearly a romanticist with a very rich imagination. This poem enfolded me with it's tenderness and imagery. Well done!
jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2006-04-21 16:45
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Lovely and tender, Roadie. I like how you've switched up the rhyme scheme towards the end, without retracting from the rhythm of the piece. The last line is a breath of fresh air. Good one.
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