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Kevin Pace
United States, IN, Greenfield

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The Perfect Prayer

I was leading the service at church Sunday night.

We were deep in the throes of a spiritual fight.

The preacher was gone, emotions ran high.

My first thought was no, but I knew I must try.

 

When it came time to pray, I wasn't prepared.

I was feeling the pressure as everyone stared.

I was searching my mind for guiding direction,

when my wondering eyes made a connection.

 

He was a principled man who never said much.

Most knew him for his compassionate touch.

Before I could weigh all the risks it involved,

I asked him to pray, my problem was solved.  

 

He reluctantly agreed with a nervous smile.

then started in, 'God'' and paused for a while.

He struggled intently for words to compose.

As each moment passed, the room-tension rose.

 

A silent prayer, not what I had in my mind,

but we all had one going for words he could find.

A long awkward silence, I had counted to ten,

when he finally yelled, "Help!" then a quiet, "Amen."

 

We all burst out laughing.  He beamed ear to ear.

Some walls began crumbling if you listened to hear.

With one magical word, so masterfully spoken,

our healing had started from promises broken.

 

This spirit-filled man, I had put on the spot,

patiently waited for the answer he sought.

With hope now replacing any thoughts of despair,

I thanked him for praying the perfect prayer.

 

copyright 2005@ Kevin Pace wordsdomatter.com

found in "A Spiritual Quest" book 3 of 5 by


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Godsgroupie Comment by: Godsgroupie - 2006-10-29 20:24
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I like that, cool and funny.
lb Comment by: lb - 2006-07-23 15:52
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brilliant poem and it makes one smile too! ;)
youngroyalty Comment by: youngroyalty - 2006-05-16 04:10
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this is really good and it just made smile for the first time in the day.how wonderful it is.
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2006-05-15 18:01
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Kevin, that was a great poem. I particularly liked the rhyme, rhythm and the subject matter. Great stuff. --Robert Barlow
CrackaZach Comment by: CrackaZach - 2006-04-23 08:36
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Our Father made us all individuals to contribute different gifts and callings as members of the Body of Christ. This is so very honest and shows that our Lord does not run on anything planned by man, including their frail attempts to fit him in a program.
I also agree that your rhythm is very well organized and flowed.
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