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Fly on the Wall

Somebody, someone


Somewhere out there, there is just one


That somebody, that someone


But how can that be for me


Cause I'm just no one


I see you, you see me


But to you I'm practicing my invisibility


To watch you, I need you


As I'm sitting in your room I see you


Fly on the wall hearing it all


I watch you moan and I see him groan


I bang my fist on the wall


You hear me, I see you


Oh how much I want to be you


You know me, he knows me


You throw your clothes off they land all over me


They land on me and I don't breathe


The question is should I open up and speak


You hear me, I see you


Oh how much I want to be you


You know me, he knows me


I smell the sex on your clothes that are laying over me


You need me, he needs you


Oh how much I want to be you


You need me, he needs you


Oh how much I want to be you'¦..  


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Comment by: - 2006-04-30 03:53
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yup, you got it chica! lol it was such a wierd thing i was doing though, it really speaks to your intelligence that you get it, lol i never thought anyone would i was just waiting for someone to go wtf??? but no one did, thanks for the comment
Comment by: - 2006-04-29 16:43
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My best friend instilled in me a value that I carry with me to this day. Friends will always be there but men come and go. So, never ever mess around with a guy that your friend likes or is dating. It can be hard sometimes because you may both be attracted to the same person but you keep your feelings to yourself and never ever betray a friend. Anyway, that is what the poem says to me. You like him..he likes her...she likes you.
Comment by: - 2006-04-22 21:50
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But to you Iā??m practicing my invisibility, great comment. Like this one and I will look forward to more.
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