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broKEN
Kenneth Fairfield Jr
United States, Washington, Olympia

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There's A Pain In My Mind

My bones are screaming and brittle
There's a pain in my mind
Or a banging riddle
Tiny razor-sharp teeth
Are swimming inside my head
Nothing can be said
Nothing can be said
No one can be Syd
Forever never hid
No one can be Roky
So make my head smokey
Everyone can be Green
Stare into the unseen

I know I know
There's slim, slim hope
That I, in this life, will
Be let in on the joke

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adarkvision Comment by: adarkvision - 2006-12-09 09:48
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Wow!! You won't believe how much this poem is speaking to me right now. I feel that I can relate to what you're trying to say. Good job man!! This def. made my day!
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