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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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SHUT THE FUCK UP!

I lie here.

Engulfed by darkness.

Cocooned in warmth.

Blanket chrysalis.

I breathe silence.

My eyes close,

I begin to fall.

 

Thats when I hear it.

 

The hollow cough that echoes through the wall.

 

Frustration fills my hollowed mind.

Temples throb.

Shutupshutupshutupshutupshutup.

BITCH.

 

The rasping coughs get louder.

A crescendo of wakefulness.

 

I imagine her.

Bent double behind the wall,

That divides us.

Choking back phlegm.

Nauseated.

Flecks of spittle clinging to her dry lips.

 

It stops.

And

Is replaced

By Brittle Banging.

Moans.

 

Has she taken a younger lover?

To smoothen her wrinkles.

Or

Is she in the throws of death?

Fitting.

Alone.

Until she slumps into eternal rest.

And then

I'll finally sleep.

Shit I'll feel bad if she's dead in the morning.


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rljcooper Comment by: rljcooper - 2008-07-16 07:00
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Good work
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-10 23:14
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The highlight of spending five straight hours of reading rubbish poetry. Why does it always take so long to find the gem? Why does it always take several hours to find something worthwhile on here? Well, it is found with this gem of a poem.
Heidi Comment by: Heidi - 2008-02-28 04:26
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Very true. I can assosiate with this level of distance from emotion when you are going through a bout of imsomnia. Very well done. It grabs at ou.
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce Online- 2007-05-27 02:49
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*smiles* Sex or Death? Which could this be?....But who cares when sleep finds me...am I right?..... touchy touchy.. Should I get up and see?... or crawl back to sleep free?.... I like this poem... Especially the end....
roswellprincess Comment by: roswellprincess - 2007-05-18 09:43
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Wow. Loved this piece. I'm sure we've all felt like this at one time or another. I agree that sleep deprivation does not lend to kindness, lol. Keep up the good work!
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