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lofty
lofty
United Kingdom, Bolton

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While it counts.

My favourite man in the world
Is lying in his bed
No philosopher
No scientist
No Alexander graham bell
Just my son
Heir
A vision of real beauty
Pure
Beautiful
Cheeky
The reason my eyes fill
The butterflies in my tummy
My aggression to protect
A reason to breathe
Thomas Tank pyjamas
Turtle underpants
Embrace your children
While you've still got the chance

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timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-04-30 15:45
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Very nice! Who needs philosophers and scientists when you have a son like that! :-)
I loved this poem.Good work!
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-24 09:43
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wow. very nice, man.
lasttoknow Comment by: lasttoknow - 2006-04-24 08:14
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wow. i love this one. it captures it all.
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-04-23 07:23
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very nice and sincere
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-23 07:05
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Absolutely lovely. Wonderfully pure and tender. Spot on.
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