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pinkestfloyd
Blair Lucas
Canada

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Into The Universe

I'm sitting here, in the grassy fields, being warmed by jupiter's smile,The intergalatic rainbow shines on me, all the the while,Into the universe, I walk on down the road of many miles,As I enter the house of colored floors and psychedelic tiles.On A steel horse going west, the liquid daughter rides,But her spoken voice cannot be heard amongst the timeless tides,The gypsy princess laughs at me while I try to hide,But I see the door is locked that shuts in the silver bride.In Neptune's garden I sit amongst the newgrown flowers of time,Mercury's wink and Pluto's kiss help me along with te rhyme,I laugh aloud, and dance and sing while silver-winged bird chimes,I leave this place on a magic ship with the jugglers, clowns and mimes.

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Mystie Comment by: Mystie - 2006-04-27 18:15
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Very interesting. I'm actually not sure how to descride the images i'm seeing. Sort of picaso's version of disney's fantasia I guess. good anyways! keep it up.
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