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SpadedHeart
K SpadedHeart
United States, Texas, Fort Worth

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Blackened Rainbow

I don't know where this came from because I am happy. I have no resentment either. Ok so it's a song that just came ot me. It has a slight angry tone ..maybe kinda like that of Alanis Morrisette.

You know what I know,

but there you go.. doing  

those things anyway 

Wanted

a sweet memory

but left traces

of blackened rainbow

in that day

 

And I can't take the blame

for the wish made in my name

Can't come true.

Not for you.

 

Can't you see

How I grew

when you wen't away?

Thought I was blue

without us as two,

but how can

I miss

this pain left for me  ?

 

Wanted

a sweet memory

but left traces

of blackened rainbow

in that day

 

In this darkness

which let me see

there a sun

in another name

thank you for

this pain

that released 

 a rebirth of ectasy.

Everything else

faded memory

of a blackened rainbow

left in your name

seeding a new destiny

Don't look back

Don't look back

Becuase now I've got rain

calling to a sun

in another name

becuase..you

wanted

a sweet memory

but left traces

of blackened rainbow

in that day

 

K

Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved

 Blackend Rainbow -Lyrical

 

You know what I know,

but you're gonna do

what you do anyway.

 

You wanted

a sweet memory

but left traces

of blackened rainbow

in your day

 

And I can't take the blame

for the wish that you made in my name

Can't come true.

I am not for you

 

Can't you see

How I grew

when you wen't away?

Thought i'd be blue

without you

but how can

I miss

the pain you left with me?

 

You wanted

a sweet memory

but left traces

of blackened rainbow

in your day

 

In your darkness

you let me see

there a sun

in another name

thank you for

this pain

that released me

to a rebirth of ectasy.

Everything else

faded memory

of a blackened rainbow

left in your name

seeding a new destiny

Don't look back

Don't look back

Becuase now I've got rain

calling to a sun

in another name

becuase you ..you

You wanted

a sweet memory

but left traces

of blackened rainbow

in your day

K

Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved

 

Without you

I found love

Love that is true

 


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VB 16 Comment by: VB 16 - 2006-10-18 03:58
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Blackened Rainbow says it all! I like humming the words.
Comment by: - 2006-04-27 09:16
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very musical. the title really works with what you are going for here. great write!
SpadedHeart Comment by: SpadedHeart - 2006-04-27 06:23
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awe thanks Leah ....that was really sweeet of you !!!
Comment by: - 2006-04-26 15:48
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Love the repeated hook and tone of the song. It would be nice to hear with music. Wonderful images in this as well. - Leah
SpadedHeart Comment by: SpadedHeart - 2006-04-26 10:29
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awe thank you .. yeah I am glad I could finally write something that I felt strong about yet keep it more condensed

I got some peeps looking into being some of the work to life .. I am veryyy anxious to hear hear ...if there is anyone else please by all means .... !!
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