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broKEN
Kenneth Fairfield Jr
United States, Washington, Olympia

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Days Apart

My love is a wet wick
since she went away
The dark clouds moved in,
it looks they're here to stay

No sunny hair shines down
on this still shade
I was in love
She was afraid

Moon overhead
And now to bed
To sleep, to wake
Alone, for her sake

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2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-01-17 14:34
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The second two stanzas were great. The first was good but I loved the second two.
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