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alandevey
Alan Devey
United Kingdom, London

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I Wanna Get Drafted

This summer my call up papers arrive


My friends now seem like no one else on earth


We dodge the draft


Concoct ill feeling, are overcome


Needing, yearning to be shipped away


A last gasp at the institutional


Don't worry ma


I'll be home for the millennium


One chance


Give the winter meaning


 


New colleagues, one dirty joke each, rationed


Rail against my superiors


Together in temporary conditions


Foetus-like at night, lost in my own poetry of horror


A year at war is always enough


To make a man of you


Yeah ma, when this boy returns


He'll be on another plane


 


Thrown amongst each other like we were in school


Girls back home touched by frozen sessions


Please let me get drafted this summer sir


Show 'em all


I don't need to pull into the play station


No footballing cup or future to map out


Away from pubs with agendas behind the overt


Let me see the horror people


Then I can feel ready to decide


 


Living for the idea of her


That strange new intensity


Brought here by the promise of a finale


Absorb it


Relish the fading of the light


 


Watch his back, another watches mine


I couldn't now if I tried


Yeah kid, I'd like to be drafted


I wait each morning underneath the letterbox


Man needs war


And phallic imagery might disturb you babe


Your tomorrow, oh so sure


My girl can't see the call up as I will


To accelerate my dreams


I fight for nothing


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Comment by: - 2006-05-22 17:41
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The primal needs war to make him feel like a man.
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