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When love falls in to your lap
Don't reach down right away
And try to give it back
Put it in your pocket
To see how it feels
Give me a chance
To prove this is real
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This is the sweetest, simplest guesture of what love should be. Loved it. Short and to the point. Brilliant though in the small amount of words that are used.
