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broKEN
Kenneth Fairfield Jr
United States, Washington, Olympia

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On A Walk To VONS

I like dancing daggers and
I like spitting knives
They provide me fun at night
guitar crunch ca cum
You don't appreciate the words
I carve into the sky
If you were a bird, away you'd fly
gonga dunga dun
I like shooting smack and
I like smoking crack
My girlfriend takes up all the slack
ding ba duh duh bing
I look like a pussy and
you look like a dick
Let's get together, poke and lick
erie rear ear ka koom
You love all the darkness
I can no longer hide
Take a peak and look inside
bip a lip cadip
You're a waste of time
You're a waste of a rhyme
You're a waste of my time
ugoblahblahblah

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broKEN Comment by: broKEN - 2007-05-31 12:25
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i stole the melody of a song by a band called Hum ("You'd prefer an astronuat"), and came up with my own lyrics while literally walking to the grocery store. lame.
daysleeper Comment by: daysleeper - 2007-05-26 19:35
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rhythmic and beautiful.....-i like dancing daggers and i like spitting knives-
2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-01-17 14:30
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i liked this. it was kind of dark but the end made me laugh. Not a complete waste of a rhyme.
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