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Patty Dohle
Patty Dohle
United Kingdom, Dorset, Bournemouth

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Prince

(Written years ago when I was madly in love with someone saint-like who I felt I was never good enough for... heh)


I wish you could know me
Not the awkward shell
Destined to die
Foolish flesh
Cringing at life in fear
Trapping the goodness
Within
Contaminating it
I can't help it
But the love I have is true
Unspoilt
But calling into the darkness
Of my sin
In vain
Suffocated by pride
Speaking with the tongues of
The Lord of Flies
What's this life for
Help me
Prince inside you
My heart sings the songs
Of sadness and pain
It hears on the radio
Get me out of here
Sweet Prince inside you
I can't make it
Alone

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mootiy Comment by: mootiy - 2007-05-31 15:20
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I agree, it is good. i think it is very beautifull. thanks for sharing
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2007-04-28 12:11
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oh man, we have all been there. the cold shoulder of ignorance is so hard to face.
Tayo Comment by: Tayo - 2006-12-28 04:53
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"My heart sings the songs
Of sadness and pain" Hi, these lines
are realy touching. The poem is good.
Great work
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2006-12-25 09:58
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Patty, when I read your poem I get a sense of desperate longing and angst. It is well written. --Robert Barlow
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-12-01 10:19
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Some amazing and almost saddening and melancholy images scribed in there. You wrote this so well, so richly and it seems, with so much thought and perseverance. Completely perfect. Loved it.

But EeeGah, your profile picture freaked me out! Haha! Love that too!
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