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broKEN
Kenneth Fairfield Jr
United States, Washington, Olympia

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FUCK!

Fuck health, I want to die
young and preposterous
End these pathetic creative
crys for help

I'm sick of sitting here nightly, as airplanes fly in to my head
All good thoughts burning and choking and throwing themselves
to their death at my feet--only the bad thoughts remain

I'm so sick of your sudden flags and everyone trying
to paint everyone and everything red, white and blue

I'm sick of every american's shock at a mind that could
conjure such horrible acts, yet what's going through the
collective U.S. of A's mind as revenge?

two tiny worms
can destroy
the biggest
apple

And now I grow a beard, because I'm not re-joining
the Navy, Army, Air-Force, or Marines
The bandwagon is already at capacity

So, I sit here still, a little cheered up now, as I
try to keep the world from butting in to my life
It's hard to do
You have to go out
sometimes....don't you?

Namdam am I

I titled this poem "FUCK!" because most
americans, I think, would be very interested
in reading a poem called "FUCK!"
You proud capitalist bastards
You illiterate ignorers of poetry!
You beautiful beautiful people!
I love you all!
You cunts

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Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-07-13 15:00
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Revenge (vengeance) is the laziest form of grief.
Vengeance is a plate best served cold.
Etc.
Humankind is a band of spiritual neuroelectricity. Where most folks hang out is in the big band in the center of it all. Phew! But it works. Start pulling out toward the edges, and feel the pull back to the middle. Farther out you go, the greater the pull to the center ... they'll call you crazy, f'instance. Quantum leap is necessary to get to the next nearest band. I hope the protagonist (whoever that might be) either 1) becomes the link, or 2) finds the link. That effing jump is a long one.

Oh yeah, incidentally, I very much liked the poem...

Ya gotta love 'em, the brutish bastards!
please Comment by: please - 2006-08-11 03:59
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I wondered what it was all about that's why I thought I'd read it!
I surely did like it, lets be a little more care free! Oh, how I sometimes can't stand the formallities and they sometimes PESS ME OFF!

I better watch what I say here in Australia cos our Prime Minister John Howard will get me locked up! (His now George Bush's friend you know)
Comment by: - 2005-08-10 11:29
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I got a kick out of this poem, an interesting read.
LadyRel Comment by: LadyRel - 2005-07-18 13:48
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i really enjoyed this good write
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