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broKEN
Kenneth Fairfield Jr
United States, Washington, Olympia

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The News

The television is screaming in pain
Show me something good
I'm going insane
Something positive and pure
A girl from the north
to bring me the cure

There's nothing left
Since you went away
But memories of death
destruction
decay

No news is good news
So I smashed the TV screen
Now I spend my nights staring
into a shattered mirror that
once held you and I

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broKEN Comment by: broKEN - 2007-08-04 01:21
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no.
only a handful of people have heard my songs.
hadassah Comment by: hadassah - 2007-08-03 15:00
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Do you have a myspace for your music? I'd like to hear it.
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-07-13 14:53
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Oh, man, this nearly brought a tear to me augen!
Well done.
Rhymes work with rhythm. Broken in the right places.
Papercupofglory ... I think is onto a secret. Plus is funny.
Sounds like the protagonist must set the ideal for cleanliness.
papercupofglory Comment by: papercupofglory - 2007-07-11 15:17
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What does the mirror say to you?
broKEN Comment by: broKEN - 2007-02-03 10:32
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yes, i have written/recorded many songs. not anymore, but there was a 2 yr period where i wrote around 150 songs. sometimes i submit lyrics as poetry. however, this particular piece was written as a poem. thank you all for the compliments.
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