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Fouchega
Gavin Fouche
South Africa, Cape Town

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Ballad Of A Bullet

A bullet
to the back of the head
takes another life in violence;
another killer shall keep his silence
as a heart beats to a halt
lungs cease to breath
blood stalls in veins
as the remaining,
rapidly fading
flicker of life
and broken
promise
of
youth
slowly
seep
into bloodstained grasses

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shepard Comment by: shepard - 2006-06-24 22:47
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hmmnn poignant
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-05-24 08:41
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I like the flow of this. I love the whole set up of the piece how it fade down into bloodsatined grasses.
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-05-23 10:05
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very powerful Gavin. liked this a lot
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-05-15 15:53
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awesome read ..awesome write.sometimes you read something and it sticks like glue..
this is the sometime.
Elinki Comment by: Elinki - 2006-05-13 11:29
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this flows so beautifully and then it dies at the end which goes great with the topic. Great job.
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