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Love Will Find Away
Love is a warm caress...on a cold winters day.
Real love, is never missed...when the loved ones away.
Love is a baby's smile...Sometimes it takes awhile...
For love to show itself...
Will today be the day?
And Love...Love...Love...
Will find a way.
Love can be a fight...when lovers don't play nice.
But it will be alright....because love will find away.
Love has no sympathy...Love can bring you to your knees.
Love takes it's own damn time...Love has it's own damn mind.
And Love...Love...Love...
Will find a way.
Love can break your balls...Love's where everyone falls...at least once...or twice. ( That's nice)
Love is a sacrifice...Love is fire and ice...
That burns your soul...It never gets old.
( It's old, It's old)
And Love...Love...Love...
Will find a way.
Love is a symphony...That two can play...
Between their knees....( That's nice...So right)
And Love...Love...Love...
Will Find A Way.
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Comment by: mom - 2006-05-11 10:57
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I loved the explanations of love. Lets not forget that the heart
wants what it wants even though our minds may not agree. I love the
comic view. Great job. |
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Comment by: lolly - 2006-05-10 05:04
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h?mmmm...unlike Ron, I really liked the (its old its old) added after the stanza. Its an ironic counterpoint, a reminder that everything we feel as some new amazing emotion is not new, its as old as time."
i felt i had to comment on Funkylele's comment because it was so amazing and because you and i have had a "conversation" about that line too.
i like it now.
by the way.
yay funkylele! |
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I enjoyed reading your love-definitions:
"Love takes it's own damn time...Love has it's own damn mind."
"Love is a sacrifice...Love is fire and ice..."
"Love's where everyone falls.."
great, I loved these, I loved all! Nice work! |
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hmmmm...unlike Ron, I really liked the (its old its old) added after the stanza. Its an ironic counterpoint, a reminder that everything we feel as some new amazing emotion is not new, its as old as time.
Despite the very familiar use of words for title and refrain I like this song. for personal reasons I really related to
Love has its own damn mind, love takes its own damn time.
I do agree with Ron about the "real love is never missed...when the loved one's away" line. I know what you mean to say but it feels awkward...how about something like
"Real love will remain if your lover goes away"? |
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| "love can break your balls" you're damn right. good job scott...love is one of those subjects where it doesn't matter how you do it as long as you keep getting it. :) |
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