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all u give

what must i do

u give me the world
a home
a child
a life of bliss
that keeps me wild
music
mayhem
emotion
fatigue
a world that i though was only a dream
an open scape of endless goals
u take me in and mend my soul
i dream of u night and day
u are prince that takes me away
i love you more every day
what more is there to say

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Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-02-22 21:49
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I think this is really a beautiful poem, I like it alot
Comment by: - 2006-09-15 05:44
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nice little dedication. I hope he liked it when you shared it with him. Very nice piece.
roy Comment by: roy - 2006-08-11 05:36
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What a tribute, to the one you love, so much honor, and appreciation, how i envy you this karma you have with your life. I liked the style, and the flow of this poem, looking forward to more...
marinesdaughter Comment by: marinesdaughter - 2006-07-06 16:20
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Oh My God! I like it, ok.....It's really tough when people analyze things to death! There's no wrong or right, no rules you have to follow to write from your heart.
isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-07-04 04:51
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I think your poetry has a different approach. Certainly not my style of writing, but I was never one to think there was one set style. All in all, this is a great poem. I really enjoyed it. And I love to see different ways of writing. Standard poetry just doesn't seem fair. Poetry is expression, and I think you do very nice expressing yourself. I really enjoyed it.
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