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henrydavidlau
Henry David Lau
United Kingdom, Manchester

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Paper-weight heart

Slackjawed dropped me on a canopy


Let the rain fall and rule


For all the blue in the sky


May equal the blue in the bruises of my soul


For all to know, for all to tell


For all to see


The picnic in the garden


The picnic of the sea


The hat wears it wearer


For what's in a head?


The border guard won't let me pass


Maybe cos I'm borderline alcoholic


Maybe cos I'm borderline psychotic


Maybe it's a metaphysical plane


That I don't really want to cross anyway


You tell me I can have it my way


But you just want to touch me


Feel me, see my sweat roll down my chin


And burn under the red hot sun


Beads of perspiration all dewy


And salty crawl out of my skin


And bounce the playful dance of


A shimmering sunset shine


Then little sands find little homes


In little cracks in between my toes


Feeling all warmed and loved


As the son goes down


The bat's wings beat


On the quadrilateral architecture


Playing god by design


Turning the water into a mirror for your soul


Whispering, panting, seductively


Husky and breathless


'I want you'


Let me taste the salt of the earth on your skin


And all the places you been


And dream of a better place than this


A paradise on earth where golden hours


Like this stretch time


Across a golden horizon as far as the eye can see


I get up to leave


And lug a paper-weight heart


That weighs heavy on my fly-away soul


If you could see my paper-weight heart


And take it out of my wretched rib cage


You will close your eyes


And hold it in one hand and with the other


Using your finger tips trace the love letters


That have been seared and branded into it


You will marvel, laugh and cry


As you read the scars on my paper-weight heart


Like stories in braille


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Manda Comment by: Manda - 2006-06-10 20:48
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interesting poem. it reads like a song and there are many layers here that could spin off into their own individual poems. the line breaks make this a little hard to follow at times, but the poem itself is rather good. playful rhyme throughout, word play is top notch and the eloquence of emotion towards the end is great. good work.
Comment by: - 2006-06-03 19:30
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That last line is the best. Reading your paper-weight heart in braille. It shows a clear image of pain so real it is exposed for all to read.
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