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taytay06
shaunte pasley
United States, illinois, chicago

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Almighty

ALMIGHTY

                                                               

  Watching as your spirit is commanded by Satan to be down and dark Knowing of this but can't really understand why the sound of any voice

is irritating to one soul inside of the temple. Step back 3 times and move forward 4. Look around and watch what you see, what you hear, whom you see, and whom you hear.

The time is near everyone is leaving. Soon there will be no one but the evil then will they too be gone, hear that trumpet, and then unit in hell. Spiritual spirits of holiness are very few in these days- taking over those that are holy. Even wax cold-hearted spirits are being transformed into stones of salt because they looked back! Meditate and release them all into the hands of him that is glorified throughout the century. For one day to us is equal to a thousands years to him. I looked in the sky as my eyes met up with all the stars that were coming my way. None stood still and waited for me to recognize of them.

I ran as I saw fire with them too! These stars were all falling from the sky-

 

the same ones you see around night-time. They all have abandoned me only

 

because I accepted the mark of the beast- 666 count with me, or die with

 

me!

 

 

 


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taytay06 Comment by: taytay06 - 2006-04-26 12:35
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thank you for your honest words although i feel like i am the one who should be writing and telling you about your enthusiastic personailty that you display from your writing! keep it up and you will be up top like the "BIG DOGS" sooner than you can imagine
popeye Comment by: popeye - 2006-04-25 15:55
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wow.......... brillant poem, your poem portrayed such quality that distinguishes it from any other piece i have read, the message you are conveying is so true, i tottally agree with you.. this is an excellent piece which you should be extremely proud of.... WELL DONE MATE..........
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