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taytay06
shaunte pasley
United States, illinois, chicago

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Serving two gods or one???

Serving two Gods Or one?  


By: Shaunte` P.


We talked yesterday

He said you were falling for his games


 


We talked yesterday


He said you was going to be with him in flames

 


We talked yesterday


He said he really hates you


 


We talked yesterday


He said tell your 'GOD' he hates him too


 


We talked yesterday


He said, 'I know I don't have much time'


 


We talked yesterday


He said make sure you keep on lying


 


We talked yesterday


He said kill and curse everyday


 


We talked yesterday


He said and you will surly be on your way


 


We talked yesterday


He said drink and fornicate too


 


We talked yesterday


He said he would be there for you


 


We talked yesterday


He said, 'I am never a friend'


 


We talked yesterday


He said 'but your enemy you can depend'


 


We talked yesterday


He said God would turn stones into souls


 


We talked yesterday


He said, 'before he let me win proud and bold'


 


We talked yesterday


He said for those who don't follow me


 


We talked yesterday


He said, 'that's one less soul I can see'


 


After I ended my conversation with him, I decided to talk to God


 


God said, 'follow me for I am the only way'


God said 'watch and see and make sure you pray'


God said 'SATAN is evil and can transform into many'


God said 'SATAN can receive your soul and leave you bleeding'


God said 'Tell SATAN he can hate me'


God said 'I am the only and powerful who can make the blind see'


God said, 'Be prepared when I come'


God said 'Or you will allow SATAN to have his fun'


God said 'Its room for you'


God said 'But the question is, do you want room for you?'


God said, 'You can live in HELL'


God said 'Or you can live in HEAVEN'


God said, 'You choose which one you can endure forever'


God said, 'You can't serve us both'


God said, 'So on which one of us will you float?'


God said, 'You will have so many times before I just take you'


God said, 'Use those times wisely before it's too late'


God said, 'Once your time is up . . . Make sure your soul is right or you' re out of luck'


'Burning in hell

Which could have been singing in heaven


Time is near get your life together


I come like a thief in the night


I come from the left and the same way from the right


SATAN doesn't care about you


He wants your soul and without that, what can he do?


Take heed and give your life to me


What? You serve two gods? How can this be?


Choose one because it can't be both


This is not April fool; this isn't a joke!


I love you and this is no lie


SATAN hates you and he laughs every time someone dies


Especially if they were not saved


This is funny because to him, your soul you just gave


To conclude this wonderful conversation, get right


Stay away from all wrongdoing because it's very polite


Love you, be good, and go tell everyone


About this message that is now said and done


These things will pass by


Can't wait till we unit in the sky


 


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Ray07 Comment by: Ray07 - 2006-04-27 13:52
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whats up, i like this poem, i actually read the whole thing!
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-24 13:50
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LOL, OMG being a christian I looved ittt!! The repition was a bit much but it flowed real well. I liked that you did not keep using "We talked yesterday" for the whold poem. The variety worked. Also the rhyming flowed and it did not seem like you forced it so that is good. There was one thing I was wondering. When you said...

God said, ??So on which one of us will you float??

Did you mean to say son or on?
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