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thewritt
David Quinn
United States, Chicago

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the beached

caught toward
the shore the pillow
stopped to greet
the gathered rock

precious and rolling
my teeth pebbles
over tumbling under
gums rolling
your, saltiest, tongue

we still are speaking.
when

holding up your ear
i will hear the sea.
while

kissing your eye
i am sun light.

washed land dry
raised in a blanket
head of my bed
the shore. Our

day Waves

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Comment by: - 2008-06-01 19:25
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good work
Juan2 Comment by: Juan2 - 2006-10-14 13:42
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Very beautiful poem, literary absynthe, fluid and entrancing. The enjambment of your lines really lends to that rocking sensation of waves, very visual. A pleasure to read, hope there'll be more soon.

Happy Writings.
Comment by: - 2006-10-10 15:00
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Very beautiful! The images are wonderfully done. I don't have any complaints! I love your style.
Comment by: - 2006-10-03 16:02
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I liked this. i don't know what more to say but very interesting! wow!
Comment by: - 2006-06-12 11:57
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