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Mòran taing

Autumn, now; simple words speak a truth about me
And lay me down; the banks of still water
Are metaphor without sound, and the trees
Are henna markers drawing a sky without clouds.

I think of the mist descending down from Lomond,
And words for that come easier, my love,
Than they do for any one of those moments
That I spent with you, in love; so clear now

That the "patterns in the ivy" were for us; how
They grow like pale roses through my life because,
I've found it all in you 'in that, even ancient language
Has leapt from my brow, simply feeling that, you lay your lips there,

And that all things must come to pass in that way; dare
I remember a day in life that I hadn't found you.

So thankyou, my love.
Mòran taing.


(For my fiance and darling Shah, whom I will love to the very end of me)

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Min Comment by: Min - 2006-06-24 13:28
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Gentle. The second line appears to be a rearrangement of some lyrics I once heard, which were also quietly spoken.
YeOldeFart Comment by: YeOldeFart - 2006-05-02 15:40
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Heartfelt, passionate, and lovely. I savor the meter and the flow. The voice, as Romeo to Juliet. Well done.
One concern. "Descending down" is redundant.
26539 Comment by: 26539 - 2006-04-26 14:39
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the imagery and emotion you portrayed in this poem are hypnotizing. I really enjoyed this. thank you for reading "nirvana"
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-04-25 03:23
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Gorgeous, love the rhythm, the images, and the emotion.
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