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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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Tearing my heart open again

You came to me,
When you had your heart broken,
I let you rest your head on my shoulder,
When you were drowning in your own tears,
Well how about now?
Was all that a waste of time?
Because now you are going back to her,
And what if the person who truly loved you,
Was the person who saved your fall?
Every time she pushed you just a little too far,
But she will make you drown again soon,
Drown in a puddle of pain,
And I will be waiting,
Waiting to let you tear your heart open again,
Waiting for you to break my heart once more.

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Comment by: - 2006-06-29 10:13
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It would seem that you have a rare capacity and honesty for writing what is real for you, for those things that impact upon your life. Keep writing as i feel that we shall hear more from you in the future and poetry and prose will form you as a person and you as a person will duly inform your work.
timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-05-01 04:27
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This is indeed a lovely writing, I really enjoyed reading it. Good work!
heartlaugher Comment by: heartlaugher - 2006-04-29 13:56
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As a person who went thru the teen years with a soggy shoulder,I can say how freaking great you did on ths one.Awesome!Glad I was led to your work.
Comment by: - 2006-04-27 10:19
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Lovely writing,very moving. As Moonfire said its really honest and effective
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-27 08:23
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Gorgeous writing again. And what if the person who truly loved you, /
Was the person who saved your fall?' - beautiful lines. These would make amazing song lyrics.
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