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White Mulberry (draft)
A night storm bristles in my eyes;
I step behind pressed lids
into the wake of a wind
that bends
but does not break
the arms of a ghost-fruited tree.
A startle of notes
comes from the chimes'
spider-footed, in disharmony'
And when the currents descend
something restless can be seen:
It slinks past the drooping beds
as the tune for the deflowered rings.
The air heaves high
and shrugs low;
White mulberries,
in plinkings of distress,
are sent from twisted boughs;
Blanched, they rest on damp earth,
scattering the grey remains of shadows.
Without fragrance or allure
they are as ones despised;
And so, their crinkled bodies retire'
Not to be consumed
within the plush folds of lips,
Not to be savoured
behind elation's smile'
They take their place
as seeping discard,
molested by the darting of flies.
Here, these pale fruits are falling
like such ashen-faced brides
that know no consummation
of their rightfully intended lives.
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Comment by: Manda - 2006-06-06 18:32
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| I agree with paul here. the feeling of unease is abundant. gives you the creeps almost, like walking through a deserted yet haunted house. however there is a despair mixed throughout that makes it so human, so personal. richly detailed and haunting. good piece. |
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I agree it is an intense piece as they often are when coming in the dead of night, especially from a storm. You captured it very well, and yet it is the wasted Mulberries that had the most impact.
Very well done
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Comment by: - 2006-04-25 11:47
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Paul,
I'm sure I've read a tiny bit of Morrison lo many eons ago....but I can't say I'm familiar with her writing......shame on me. *cowers* I wasn't an English major, so can I use that as an excuse?? heh My Mom was, though---she seems quite fond of Morrison. If I'm not mistaken, didn't she write "The Bluest Eye"? Anyways, thanks for the kind comment. This came from a night storm (of course) and a dream I had. |
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| this was intense. very gothic. strangely reminded me of toni morrison's writing -- that kind of fructifying sensuality mixed with a sense of unease |
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"Myths From The Mists Of Time"
There was a time when knights travelled the land in search of...
Visit that time again in these five works from the mind of informal grae.
Enter upon a small quest in anticipation of strange adventures to behold.
(All proceeds to charity)
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