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im

im scared
im alone
im without you
im trying to come home
but i cant
i want a stable life
with you
but i dont know how long that will last
i want the love you used to give
looking deep in my soul
i want to live how we used to live
with every best goal
but where are you
and where am i
and why are we both wanting
to die

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thisISme Comment by: thisISme - 2007-03-14 16:35
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I love how simple but yet so complicate this poem is. I really enjoyed it!
NicFran Comment by: NicFran - 2007-01-26 13:32
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The personal style your poem takes--had me reading it three times!
Comment by: - 2006-09-15 05:31
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poetry just is poetry Ma'am. I love how you kept a similar phrasing and language and it spoke to me, especially the ending and how I have felt fr much of my life. Very open and heartfelt and a true expression, which makes it wonderful
TDaniels Comment by: TDaniels - 2006-06-12 20:15
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enjoyed.
Comment by: - 2006-06-07 09:40
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wow simple yet,
fantastic.
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