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Very sweet and gentle. At first I thought it was going to be a drug poem, and while it still may be, as it's very trippy to think about, I don't think thats the case considering how young you are. It's elegant and dreamy, and the last two lines are just like "boom! oh yeah!" Are all your poems about God? The Inferno poem of mine you commented on, you were correct in it not being biblically accurate. Its based off a famous epic poem. Dante's "Inferno" and Divine commedy. But good job on this piece as a whole. It all fits together perfectly.
