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Mystie
Mystie Bennett
United States, Georgia, kathleen

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Spirited Away

The pattering of fairy feet softly 'long the ground

echoes through the mystic night

with moonbeams shining down

Come they have to mischief make

Children to steal- for innocence sake

To keep and hold them ever more

and thus, how goes the fairies lore.


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Vision79 Comment by: Vision79 - 2008-03-19 17:38
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This to is good.I think you will have a book of poems under your belt by the time your twenty.
Stefan Comment by: Stefan - 2007-11-14 11:58
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You ever hear that a bird's prints in the snow are supposed to have been dancing fairies?
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-08-27 12:01
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Fun. Smooth. Lyrical. I like.
popeye Comment by: popeye - 2007-03-03 09:01
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Another brillant piece of poetry, there is something unique about your writing that's so fluent and equally magical. soft, gentle, tender words that soothes one's soul. brillant despcriptions. WELL DONE.....
tessae Comment by: tessae - 2007-03-02 06:58
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Short, but interesting. I think it's cool to write poems with unique twists on popular myths, like fairies. You have some good imagery too.
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