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Bbounty1
Scott Waugh
United States, Oklahoma, B... Fu..

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Beautiful to Me

Lay your head down, and I'll lock the doors.
Let all your cares down, down on the floor.

Lay your head down, right next to mine.
Let all your sorrows, ease from your mind.

Cause I've been waiten for today,
to find the words that say, (that)
You are so beautiful to me.

And you've been looking for a love,
asking the lord above,
for the love, you've been dreaming of,
for a while...maybe more.

And you've been looking for a place,
to ease the troubles from your face,
So let your heart embrace,
That it's here,...in my arms.

So hold your head up, and give me a smile.
Just let your love flow, for a little while.

Cause I've been waiting for today,
to find the words that say, (that)
You are so beautiful to me.

And I've been looking for a love,
asking the lord above,
for the love I've been dreaming of,
for a while...maybe more.

And I've been looking for a place,
to ease the troubles from my face,
so let my heart embrace,
that it's here,..in your arms.

Cause...
I want to be with you.
I want to dream with you.
I want to cream with you.

Cause...
You are...so beautiful to me.
You are...so beautiful to me.
You are...so beautiful to me.

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Funkylele Comment by: Funkylele - 2007-10-17 16:46
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Back after a long hiatus and one of the first things I had to do was start checking out some of my fave people here. I always look forward to your song lyrics, unapologetically straightforward and without pretense just simple raw feelings and you do it so well. I appreciate your simple romantic streak. Im still trying to decide about that "I want to cream with you" line. its a sneak slap in the doe eyed heart on a sleeve emotions of this piece. I think I love it and hate it at the same time for that reason !
fredav Comment by: fredav - 2007-04-09 10:00
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wow..another awesome song.. have you recorded this already? i tried to click that link on your myspace but the song/video didn't play..
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2007-04-04 17:45
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These are lovely lyrics. Please forgive my ignorance, but in the first couplet, second line, is "your your" deliberate?

You write in Verse 3, line 1 "waiten" and in verse 7, line 1 "waiting" is there a typo here?

Verse 6 - "hold you head up" should that be "hold your head up"?

Little mistakes, (if they are) easily fixed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment by: - 2006-07-22 08:44
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I wish I could hear this on the radio. Your words are beautiful and sweet. You must love this person very much. I hope you are a success someday. Good luck. Thank you for commenting on my poem. bye, Doris
mom Comment by: mom - 2006-05-11 11:05
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When you are famous from your genius writing I hope to be able to say I used to Email The best performer in the world.
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