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Elinki
Chris McGuffin
United States, Colorado, Arvada

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Contort You with Frenetic Amnesia

Shuttled through the tunnel
Of a star-bound placid trip.
Cascading onto the crystal ship
On route to the God's Palace of atonement

Ariving-
Finding no being of an enlightnening stature.

Only 12 abandoned chairs of confinement
And a pellucid mirror refelcting what I see fit
-taken in by the limpid mirror's plutonic mind tricks.

Scuba-diving into
Pure creative matter
Plunging into creation attire
Gathering each puzzle piece desired
And placing them on the board as I adhere.

Falling through the back door
Wanting more-

Unfinished with a process of thought
_Parachuting back down to standard consciousness.

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Comment by: - 2006-04-30 19:33
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Beautiful, i love your fragmented imagery. Too many lines that I love to pick out: one for the bookshelf for certain.
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-04-29 13:30
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Wow this poem is a mindscrew!

Excellent use of imagery to change between different environments- simply really abstract, but superb poetry!
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-04-28 11:26
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Oh my did you visit my mind. Great picture of what goes on in our creative self.
Great job. You have an inner voice that loves to speak.
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