Muses Minstrels Bards and Raconteurs
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Muses Minstrels Bards and Raconteurs
Creators,
Retinas and eardrums,
Nerve endings, vessels
Of verbiage,
Lungs inflated with
The breath of being,
Capillaries of meaning.
Seven layers of thought,
Unexpected guests to
A welcome feast of
Inspiration.
You the unmet conspirators,
Muses and Harbingers,
Voices in the Digital Bled
Cacophony of this
Electron mayhem beauty.
You give more rhythm
To my dance.
You bless my days
With verse and prose,
You twist my mind
In better ways.
This is a tribute
To all you gifted souls.
I sing your praise.
Thank you for the grace
And gift of vision.
I am wealthy from seeing
All that you have shared.
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Comment by: - 2006-05-16 11:11
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| Awww this is really beautiful, humility as well. It's great writing I think the last 2 stanzas are just fantastic. (All of it is but escpecially the last 2 for me) Loved it again. Thanks |
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Comment by: Khema - 2006-05-08 06:48
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yay! the dance of appreciation! delicious words from a beautiful soul. i touch your feet :)
Kimmy~ |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-05-02 01:42
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How beautiful. You've succeeded into weaving your silk into the corners of my memory. My very favorite lines -
You give more rhythm
To my dance
You bless my days
With verse and prose,
You twist my mind
In better ways.
This is a tribute
To all you gifted souls.
I sing your praise.
Exquisite! |
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| This is great - you've made verse about dance - dance! "You twist my mind /In better ways" is a great line/image. Nice work. |
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| Lost for words,give them back,Now!You are just incredible. |
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