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Matthew Eduard Abuelo
Matthew Abuelo
United States, New York, New York City

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The Death Of The Unknown Poet Van Gogh

The Death Of The Unknown Poet Van Gogh

His name and words meant nothing to the city
but,
those who heard each line like an on going tide
were brought to shark-skin clarity.
The streets filled with tears,
women came with excitement.
But,
none of his books sold.
This is the price he had to pay for mocking death,
his genius falling through the cracks in the side-walks.
Another Van Gogh goes un-noticed.
Like so many young artists before him who drowned in the mediocrity around them.
But Van Gogh,
I know your genius.
I feel it in me ever day
Its furious and unforgiving flow
that will not save us
or the ear that you pierced with the blade that you stole from her.
The wheel is still turning for us but,
the gears are starting to lock.
You were not going to end it like him.
No.
Not with a gun or in the wheat fields that still grows to pay homage to his blood.
The concrete was where the conception of you're demons took place and its here that you still fill you're pockets with the words that form lines in the eye of time.
You were going to perform the final ritual,
Strange celebration.
And they were going to wonder how another Van Gogh receded into the night,
Un-noticed.

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RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-11-04 20:05
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This another great poem Mathew.
Comment by: - 2005-10-12 11:05
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Powerful poem, you show a great deal of depth in your writing. My only suggestion to you would be to pay attention to the formatting and maybe use stanzas in your writing. It would make for a better read. I look forward to your future submissions.
Lapoeta Comment by: Lapoeta - 2005-08-21 14:17
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Well the apostrophe police are after you...It's and you're should be Its and your...just nitpicking for the hell of it in case all this praise goes to your head.
lisalatourette Comment by: lisalatourette - 2005-08-21 08:37
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i can't believe there aren't more comments on this one--this is a beautiful poem! your metaphors are absolutely sick (in the good way): "those who heard each line like an ongoing tide were brought to shark-skin clarity"...shark-skin clarity, i love that. i can't wait to read more of your work.
Comment by: - 2005-07-18 15:59
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"And they were going to wonder how another Van Gogh receded into the night,
Un-noticed."
Good one.
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