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Not precisely no. But I am glad you liked it.
Fears come from many places, both internal and external sources for them. Anyway, that poem was written a little while ago, and I view that situation differently. And thankfully, myself differently than I had at that point in my life.
I do love your directness. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-29 08:30
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"I undress your fears
Launching kisses of gold
That rip appart the ink above"
I love that stanaza...maybe one "p" in apart.
I may have interpreted this incorrectly, but it seemed as if you are approaching a new romance with someone that is knotted emotionally by melancholy and you want to erase some of that heartache and begin anew with her. - Leah |
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| Thank you I am glad you liked it! |
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| Another beautiful poem, I can't decide which is my favourite stanza. Loved it! |
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| I am, admitably so, an ametuer at writting of any sort. That you appreciate it, is a gift and I thank you. And private in a sense, but not really. |
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