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Picoreturns
Picoreturns
United States, TX, Webster

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Square of Time

It lays lifeless floating,
More, and only inside of shadows.
Call Mr. Burton he will know what to do.
Wait.
Catch a glimpse of his midnight fall.
His Grace cursed my name.
But still.
They all fell in love with my hate,
Fate she answers nothing _
More questions to hand in
I have simply nothing for you.
You.
You think you knew me once.
You say you remember who I was
I am nothing.
No one.
Empty of life,
And wishing to be jaded.
Mark me up on the sign post
Of your next feature film.
Tell the sad story of my life.
Too bad, Mr. Price,
He narates nevermore.

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Picoreturns Comment by: Picoreturns - 2006-04-29 07:17
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Thank you. I worrid about posting this here. I see this as a more professional place than my other site. So I am cautious as to what I submit.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-29 07:15
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Wonderful writing again. Clever use of little gothic flourishes to heighten the drama without slipping into the usual cliches of gothic poetry. Great read.
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