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helminthophobic
Andy McFadzen
United Kingdom, Glasgow

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Ideas

Through the rain sleet ideas,
sometimes hitting nothing at all,
occasionally striking a mind,
settling in only the most receptive nodes:
planting seeds of inspiration
from which spring the roots
of creativity.

But like apple pips planted by a child,
though thrust into fertile soil,
and watered with clock like regularity,
rarely do they bloom.

In the right conditions, however,
the seeds germinate,
and the fruit borne
is the oil
in the engines of
science and
art.

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sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-03-01 16:55
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very pretty. i love the imagery and metaphors.
smackalicious Comment by: smackalicious - 2007-02-15 19:43
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Very nice. I like the comparison of writing to digging in mines. It's very true. :)
goodmoses Comment by: goodmoses - 2006-11-16 21:30
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Hopefully you are as a cloud to me and this piece is as a rain to plant a seed in my "most receptive node". I shall attempt to reciprocate.
Beck Comment by: Beck - 2006-08-09 18:43
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Great write. The choice of words is excellent and I loved the comparison of creativity with a child planting seed.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-07-15 08:47
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Through the rain sleet ideas,
sometimes hitting nothing at all,
occasionally striking a mind,
settling in only the most receptive nodes:
planting seeds of inspiration
from which spring the roots
of creativity." -- gorgeous opening, the piece continues on with this same beautiful rhythm. good write over all. thanks for the read.
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