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Elinki
Chris McGuffin
United States, Colorado, Arvada

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Wild Monotony

Pussy Galore
Is a whore
That I beat-off into a door

Playing tether ball wither her mobile
On vibrate
Between her night-gate
She does gyrate on the floor

Because
Pussy Galore
Is a whore
That I beat-off into a door

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Comment by: - 2006-05-01 11:46
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i agree with moley. funny, not what i expected. like the repetition.
Comment by: - 2006-04-30 21:29
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This was not what I had expected. I like it. Now if we could just change Pussy Galore to Dick Galore and beat it against a door that would be amazing. At least to my warped mind.
moley Comment by: moley - 2006-04-30 19:11
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haha, it made me smirk! The sing-songy feel of the rhythm adds to the humour.
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