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Elinki
Chris McGuffin
United States, Colorado, Arvada

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Herbal Seeds of Cosmic Seize

I want to take a backhoe to the sky
And plant seeds to prosper
Taking us high into nigh
Where we die into communal Xanadu
Furthering our divine expansure
Setting course to
Human evolvement
And guardian stature.

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Comment by: - 2006-05-08 20:24
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Backhoe to the sky to plant seeds...great concept. Love the way you mix the ethereal and earthly into one concise desire. Great write. - Leah
Comment by: - 2006-04-30 19:10
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The rhyme and rhythm scheme works great here: I also admire your ability to compact your ideas so effectely. Great stuff!
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