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smalltownpoet
mackenzie schmitt
United States, Oregon, Forest Grove

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heart v.s. head

there's a battle in my head and i don't know who will win

my head which knows better, or my heart which craves that sin

i fake it, pretend i don't care

like it doesn't matter if you're even there

but every time i look in the mirror i know i'm lying

its like i can see through my soul and see that i'm dying

i need to get rid of this disguise

and stop screaming theses allibies

and get back to the one thing i know

that i never ever want to let you go

 


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marinesdaughter Comment by: marinesdaughter - 2006-07-27 10:27
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Ooh good. I like the structure and rhyming.
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-04-30 23:13
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This is good. I like your exploration of the internal struggle. And your rhyme pattern is easy, not forced. Very nice.
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