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a worthless addict
adam feinberg
United States

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Sterilization

So sick,
Your silent writhing being.
Can you spare me your
Destructive love?
Can you spare me your
Silent agonizing life?
You're Sick!
You silent slimy being.
Can I take away your
Suicidal, unprotected,
Disenchanted, sorry life?
I'm sick.
Sick with your infected life.
I've got to,
get away from you.
Can't you just take away
your sorry silent life?
We're sick.
Sick with our silent lives.
Sick with writhing, squirming,
Disinfected, disaffected life.
We're clean.
Clean and disinfected.
Couldn't ask for more,
Maybe just some,
Writhing, squirming,
Laughing, Shouting,
Suicidal, self important,
re-infected, static signs of life.

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GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce - 2007-08-20 16:51
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wow. Pretty interesting poem. I understand about "So sick,
Your silent writhing being.
Can you spare me your
Destructive love?
Can you spare me your
Silent agonizing life?
You're Sick!"
the flow was great too. :)
Comment by: - 2005-07-15 00:17
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I loved the last line. Good piece.
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