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seventhone17
J. Rafter
United States, CA, Santa Monica

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<P>Save me from these old folks</P>
<P>Plus thirty folks</P>
<P>Who look for things</P>
<P>Everywhere they go</P>
<P>Save me from this preconception</P>
<P>About conception and consummation</P>
<P>Parents who pry</P>
<P>And ask too many questions</P>
<P>Save me from these failing friends</P>
<P>Who fall off the end</P>
<P>Thinking life lies in movies on Saturday</P>
<P>Then visiting restaurants together</P>
<P>Save me from the whirlwind romance</P>
<P>That would sweep me off my feet</P>
<P>Instead give me one one night stand</P>
<P>At least of not knowing illusion</P>
<P>Save me from this destined path</P>
<P>Point me towards tomorrow upside down</P>
<P>Leave behind this grey smoky town</P>
<P>I'll be back I promise</P>
<P>Save, oh save me, world, cruel world</P>
<P>Make me suffer, feel pain, and then have the guts to return</P>
<P>All this happiness is what I know</P>
<P>Just throw me the shepard's hook already</P>

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