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alisha
alisha b.
United States, missouri

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Why do you?

I'd say you're always there for me...

But there are so many times that you're not.

You always love and care for me...

Except when you hurt me a lot.

If you don't like it when I leave you,

Then why do you push me away?

If you do not want me around you,

Then why do you ask me to stay?


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Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-05-20 20:56
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This is very good expression of the pain of relationships. Life is full of contradictions. Very well written.
Comment by: - 2006-05-17 07:25
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Very touching. Great job.
[x].Peace.[x]
megabyte800 Comment by: megabyte800 - 2006-05-01 20:43
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God, do I know that feeling. Well put.
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