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| 'samba till dusk, tango with dawn' fantastic lines! this is very moving in many ways Joni. it's been ages since I last had a dance like this, and reading your poem is calling to these hips! love it! |
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| The references to dance are perfect for this piece i think. great flow, very graceful in its wording.. you were obediant and faithful to your theme every which way. great write. |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-04 02:29
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| This was lovely Joni, It had an open quality and I love the Latin music and dancing elements portrayed in a mix with heaven. It is almost as if the angels are dancing. - Leah |
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| Thanks for the wonderful comments. I'm not very wordy and I prefer to stand back in awe of the horizon. I'd prefer to have my readers fill in the gaps of the distant love affair after the storm. I leave your mind open to your suggestions. I'm open for a better definition though. Thanks Collin for your expectation of a thrill. I simply write my minds eye with my senses and sometimes I purposely don't define too much. I prefer to paint the picture and have the readers interpret their own landscape or canvass so to speak. Thanks guys. I love that you guys like to tango, and walt. |
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A meditative piece that reads with a playful and waltzy style. Now I know you love dance!
This line is lovely: 'samba till dusk, tango with dawn.' Very stylish! |
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