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taytay06
shaunte pasley
United States, illinois, chicago

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Intense RAPE

As i took the pain from your penis buried deep inside my private

i thought to escape your strong grip with a passion of violence

my moans from the pain caused you to cover my mouth

i bit your hand causing me to shout

 i knew i was in for a bruise from your fist

you hit me twice, which resulted in a kiss

a kiss of hate from you to me

i turned my face as your lips touched my check

because of this, you were mad and forced your dick deeper inside

i started crying saying,  "bitch die. . . bitch die"

you began moving up and down hard like the strong man you are

i couldn't take it; the pain was too harsh

i didn't want to have kids by a man i did not know

you burst through my door but now it's no more

i reached to the window stick that rested on the stand

as you enjoyed my presence, i cracked your head and ran

out the door i ran stumbling in fear

from one eye dropped a tear

i was angry, confused, and sad at the same time

this was my day, Let Victory be mines . . . .

 

 

I didn't finish it yall

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Lichtentunes Comment by: Lichtentunes - 2007-12-13 08:12
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This was interesting and intense but I wish you would fix all the typos and grammatical mistakes.

"this was my day, Let Victory be mines . . . ."

"i turned my face as your lips touched my check"
Evangela Comment by: Evangela - 2007-04-26 20:01
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I like the rawness of your work. So surreal. I look forward to reading more.
BellaHellfire Comment by: BellaHellfire - 2007-04-24 21:02
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"As i took the pain from your penis buried deep inside my private"
Sometimes we have to be raw like this. Rape can be worse than being beaten. It can be worse than being murdered.

I hope you will keep writing raw and honest like this.
jreamwriter Comment by: jreamwriter - 2007-01-12 22:52
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taytay06 u r 2 talented 2 be associated with someone like ray07. her vulgarity shows her ignorance. this poem is excellent.
Ray07 Comment by: Ray07 - 2006-05-06 11:10
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fuck u 2.....punk ass nigga, do your groupies know u on crack!
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