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randyjbc
Rahul D. Gupta
India, New Delhi, New Delhi

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And the Machete Rises High...

Can you possibly imagine,

Can you possibly feel the fear,

When you know that your life,

Your precious life, hangs in balance

Yes "balance" whose one side is laden,

With swords, machetes and other blades of vicious intent

And the other with a piece of paper identifying your roots,

But paper, fragile in the best of times becomes worthless

In the face of evil

Evil with it's bloodshot eyes demands real evidence,

"Who are you?" you give a name'¦

Ever played Russian Roulette then you would know

How it feels, when you know your life,

Your best friend's life hangs in balance

You pray to get away, dissolve or vaporize or anything

You pray for your humanity to be recognized,

But the hand holding the bloodied blade, the acid bottle,

The kerosene can, doesn't believe in the name you give

You are then asked to recite the Quran or the Gita

You smirk inwardly in spite of the situation,

"Thank god I will live" and you rattle off verses

That you learnt from your friends

The demon is happy

His benevolent smile allows air reach your lungs

And you hastily begin to walk away

"WAIT! We need proof that's concrete that's absolute-

Pull down your pants"

 

And then you know you are about to die,

For an inch of skin

You will be carved like a pig

You beg and you plead

And the machete rises high'¦


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frees340 Comment by: frees340 Online- 2008-09-13 13:41
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Wow. This is really good. From one Indian writer to another, I have to say that you have bested my poetry tenfold. Well done. Well done.
Johndeprey Comment by: Johndeprey - 2007-12-27 19:23
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Ah You're studying English Literature. Lucky man! I like your poem, how uninhibited it is, straight to the jugular. Awful this should be a topic of our time. It's a world where each News seems worse than the last. It's good for the likes of me to read this poem. I tend to think everyone thinks like me, but of course there are people dying every day because of blockheaded dogma crazed maniacs forgetting any notion of "good", seeing only labels.
finolala Comment by: finolala - 2007-07-26 18:47
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Wonderful insight into a world I am pretty much ignorant of.
"Ever played Russian Roulette" This cries out for a question mark.
But other than that, I really like. Fresh subject matter that I've never read a poem about is hard to come by and this really interested me.
Also the scales imagery was wonderful, equilibrium and balance is such a fickle mistress! Good work.
stopxlightxgreen Comment by: stopxlightxgreen - 2006-06-22 12:12
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I liked your use of images to portray inner tumult. The subject matter of this poem is controversial, and I'm glad you wrote about it.
timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-06-20 11:41
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It's a very interesting poem. I think everything "hangs in balance", we always have to choose; we can only hope our decision is correct.
Good write, it's so sad that there's so much hate and intolerance...
Well done, it's a great poem.
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