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Lies.

Lies.

You said you'd never leave me,well i guess that was a lie.You promised me forever,but now i'd rather die.Than to see my world crumble,andwatch you walk away.For this heart to fall apart,as it asks you to stay.

I hold a pistol in my hand my world turns icy cold,no longer can i ease the pain of all the lies you told.

Lock and load within my grasp,so lead me to my fate.Its a 6foot drop at 12 o'clock,and im already late.

The World outside my window,slowly fades to black.From the moment i pulled that trigger,there was no going back.I said i's always need you,to this i have stayed true.I said i'd always love you,which each day that passes i do.

 

[[ was basically written when someone decided to lie to me, and it all came from there. Pretty cold but its how i was feeling at the time.]]


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xemoxangelx Comment by: xemoxangelx - 2007-03-13 11:38
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i realy liked this :)
Comment by: - 2006-05-13 07:23
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hahahahaha i'm your first comment hehe GENDER!!!!!!!!!!!!
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