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Poetica
Michelle Richardson
United States, MA, Boston

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Patriotic Mask Unveiled

I wish more people would take off that comfortable mask called "patriotism"


and realize that like it or not we are all products of the infamous 'melting pot'


that brews the American dream to a dim flame cutting the gas bought


from those that seek to destroy us right before it comes to a boil thus never allowing it to cook properly and then they have the nerve to tell me


where me allegiance should lie


 


I'm not going to cry, rant or rave


I'll find acceptance in being an indentured slave


Living from paycheck to paycheck never being able to call anything mine


No even my kids'the judge owns them


I carried my boys for nine months and brought them into this world


But if some judge'that never wiped away a tear of despair from my eyes


or rubbed my back after the 5th double shift in a row to make ends meet


close enough to put food on the table for 2 boys...BY MY SELF


never once kissing one of their boo boo's to make them better


all this judge has to do is sign a letter


And I don't have a say in it.


What's fair in that ?


and even though I don't fear that issue I am aware that it's how things are 


 


and I know that no matter how hard I work and try


I won't come close to even a sniff because at the end of the day


Uncle Sam is the only one eating


the quote on quote American Pie


While the ones that live here are left to die


homeless and penniless because of the budget cuts and downsizing


Where known to feed the bellies of monsters before their uprising


And we give them the ticket to fly the plane that swoops down


to blow up the hand that feeds them


 


I find it quite ironic and even more so PATHETIC


That I can't get help to put my boys through private schools


but they gladly provide the tools


That educate those that want to cause harm


Then they try and pass laws to chase away the only workers on the farm


And they don't yield with the ones in the field


That work to provide a weak meal to those they left behind


Yet they find it just and quite fine


That the murderer of a child gets three meals a day


Free housing, health insurance and recreation on my pay


But the hard working miserables can't stay?!


And they're forced to live in fear day by day


Because they don't bear that GREEN ticket, to the all you can eat buffet


of the American Pie that you can't eat, in their pocket


Yes sir it's a hell of a lot easier to talk it


Without putting on the worn out shoes and trying to walk it


With the weight of supporting a family that you haven't seen in years


Because you lack the green card that can swipe away your tears


Through an INS scanner saying yes you can go see your loved ones


and then return to the grind


Besides feeling unkind, doesn't your conscience feel a little off wack


when you sit on your high horse and  tell ME to go back...


to where I came from


I was born right here you insignificant crumb


And if you check back through the years


You'll find the truth in your family tree


"oooh say you will seeeee"


Someone or two or three...crossed THESE  borders by land or sea


 


It doesn't matter if  their names were jotted down in a log in Ellis Island or etched in Plymouth Rock YOU FOOL NONE OF US ARE 100%


its a catch 22


stitched right into your red, white and blues


 


Now I'm going to smile as I remember that you're ingnorant


cuz the only truth is that...


 


AMERICAN = IMMIGRANT


 


 


                                                                Copyright © 2006


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fishbowl42 Comment by: fishbowl42 - 2007-01-24 20:01
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One Word - Powerful
JPM Comment by: JPM - 2006-11-06 23:17
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They will get the message soon or later. they will confess their wrong. Martin Luther still lives in american hearts.
Big Brother Comment by: Big Brother - 2006-05-04 19:33
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I appreciate what you're saying, even if I find it a bit more extreme than my own stance. Nice work overall, though. I like the blank verse; really adds something to it.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-05-04 06:14
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I was really with you up till you started up with this mindless business---"But the hard working miserables can??t stay?!And they??re forced to live in fear day by day
Because they don??t bear that GREEN ticket, to the all you can eat buffet". You might stop whining long enough to recall that these people are foreign nationals, not U.S. citizens. You are saying we should open the doors to the terrorists, the Chinese, the North Koreans, or anyone else who gets the itch to wander around here.
hopefeardream Comment by: hopefeardream - 2006-05-04 03:00
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Hell yeah! I'm not going to pretend I know all about the US, having only known it via the news, films and michael moore, but I have always found the hypocrisy of immigration quite disturbing; i mean, do these people not know their own country's history? Is it not the only history you are taught in your schools? There has been a huge uproar over here in britain about illegal immigrants and the right wing papers have brainwashed the majority of people to want to shoot them on arrival; perhaps we'll all learn to get along one day, huh?
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