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Picoreturns
Picoreturns
United States, TX, Webster

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Solomon's Lie

Crashing out of the idea of you
Flies my talent, with ink still wet.
You kept my birthday,
For your own gains.
And stole from me
My chorus,
While I took the blame.
I treasure the thought
Of the person you were.
I am not betrayed.
I am not destroyed.
But broken, and saddened
Because you made this choice.

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Picoreturns Comment by: Picoreturns - 2006-05-04 07:45
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Thank you so much
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-05-04 07:44
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"I am not betrayed. / I am not destroyed. / But broken, and saddened / Because you made this choice" - great ending.
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