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Picoreturns
Picoreturns
United States, TX, Webster

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Does she still cry at night
Do you still not know why
Does the world still close in
Even on the clear skies
Will you still remain
What you never were
Can I be forgiven
For the gifts I gave
And for what I lost

Carved words:
Did they scar
Are my old dreams
Sitting on the stool

No one but you
Could know how I feel
No one but you
Can ask me for hope

But remnace of laughter
Are seald with the blade
And that much more in common
Removes only the stains

Can you forgive
Ask for a hug
Reason with fate
Lie to him again
Yesterday, is it gone

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halpert Comment by: halpert - 2007-01-29 18:07
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"carved words"
brillant line. wonderful poem
Picoreturns Comment by: Picoreturns - 2006-05-04 07:46
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Thank you, I can always count on you to write some response. And you are never anything less than gracious
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-05-04 07:45
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Beautiful and intense writing. Like this a lot.
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